rap: freestyle that i wrote down

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by freetheweed, Feb 27, 2003.

  1. freetheweed

    freetheweed Banned

    i had to edit this since i had referances of other drugs in it.

    Need me some weed so lend me your ear
    wait, thats not weed you need that to hear
    i need some weed,
    hoping this high last so i can be free
    addicted to weed, smokin on the hills
    Livin my life, thats how it feels
    i dont give a **** what the cops say
    cops are fags wth a badge, whadda say?



    need some bud
    got the money
    but dont want to craw out of bed
    outside ill get shot in the head
    by who i dont know
    mafia members droppin everyone to the floor
    help please
    i think im insane
    I think shot is my brain
    i think alot
    none makes alot of sense
    **** it
    are you blitzed?


    so hear my rap
    and listen to what i say
    if can
    smoke weed everyday
    dont give up this fight
    we need everyone
    to let freedom ring
    free the weed
     
  2. hauptmann

    hauptmann Seasoned Activist

    :( *sighs* :laugh:
     
  3. sugarmonster

    sugarmonster New Member

    i quess thats, good,

    NOT, I quess that sucks man,
     
  4. crackerjack_ooo

    crackerjack_ooo New Member

    I stand Idley,
    watching society progress
    I get lost in the mess,
    of individual regression
    causes aggression,
    widespread depression,
    to be solved by one
    with a medical proffesion.
    theyll make you numb,
    drug you up and you'll be dumb
    if your unlucky
    Your head gets empty like a rubber ducky.

    A million minds formatted
    doctrines implanted
    successful conformities
    mindless entities
    forced to agree
    by the marvels of technology


    ---Thats just a little thing i came up with right now... is it any better than that "freetheweed" chump's?
     
  5. crackerjack_ooo

    crackerjack_ooo New Member

    I stand idley
    watching society progress
    i get lost in the mess
    of individual regression
    causes aggression
    widespread depresion
    to be cured by one
    with a medical proffesion
    theyll make you numb
    drug you up and
    youll be dumb
    if your unlucky
    your head gets empty
    like a rubber ducky


    A million minds formatted
    doctrines implanted,
    successful conformities
    mindless entities
    forced to agree
    by the marvels of technology



    --- thats just some **** i typed up right now... think its any better than that "freetheweed" chump's? (it prbly sounds better in my head then it looks in writting)
     
  6. crackerjack_ooo

    crackerjack_ooo New Member

    wow! i was faded... i even wrote it twice! lol
     
  7. Island Bob

    Island Bob New Member

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